The Mountain's Vortex: A Creepypasta Hiking Horror Story
Darkness PrevailsMarch 20, 202029 min52,813 views
39 connections·39 entities in this video→The Unwanted Hike
- 🌲 The narrator reluctantly agrees to a hiking trip with his stepdad, Craig, to appease his mother, still grieving his father's sudden death.
- 💡 Craig, an enthusiastic but not outdoorsy man, tries to bond with the narrator by bringing MREs and freeze-dried treats.
- ⚠️ The narrator initially feels resentment towards Craig, viewing him as a replacement for his father, leading to an awkward conversation.
Mysterious Forest Phenomena
- 🔥 An inexplicable event occurs where a campfire is extinguished, and the logs used to start it vanish, only to reappear later, unburnt.
- 🎶 A strange, persistent metallic humming sound is heard from above, baffling the narrator and Craig.
- 🌀 The next day, the humming leads them to three black vortexes hovering above the trail, which then descend upon a dead deer, causing it to disappear without a trace.
The Vortex and Disappearance
- ⚠️ After witnessing the vortex consume the deer, a healthy buck appears, only for a mountain lion to attack it in the same spot, mirroring the earlier event.
- 🏃 Frightened, the narrator and Craig decide to head back, but find themselves lost as darkness falls.
- 🏕️ They set up camp again, with the narrator now more fearful of the dark and determined to keep the fire going.
Craig's Fate and the Escape
- 🌌 The humming returns, and the narrator finds Craig standing by the campfire, reaching out to a large, black vortex.
- 💔 Craig touches the vortex and vanishes, leaving the narrator in shock and disbelief.
- 🚶 The narrator, unable to move Craig, leaves him catatonic by the campfire and flees the mountain, running for hours.
A Twisted Return
- ⛰️ The narrator encounters a swirling black wall blocking his exit from the mountain, but pushing through it leads him back to the parking lot.
- 🔄 Miraculously, Craig is there, healthy and happy, ready to start the hike as if nothing had happened.
- 😨 The narrator, deeply disturbed, feigns illness to convince Craig to leave, but later suggests another weekend trip, hinting at a cyclical or altered reality.
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